Monday, November 27, 2006

Good Travel Place


Nowadays, many people would like to travel in other countries in the vacations. In travel agency there are a lot of journeys you can choose, an independent travel, package deal and so on. There are some good or special places where I have been to, for example, Baltimore and Montreal.

Baltimore was recently selected as one of the top 10 summer destinations in the world for 2005 by frommer's, the world's leading travel guide publisher. It's truly a city on the move and is in the midst of a cultural renewal featuring new attractions, restaurants and hotels. It an excellent destination for summer and fall. If you have not been there before, you will find there are so many things that you cannot explore them all in one day. The Inner Harbor is only one of the city's many treasures, a scenic and popular waterfront area with lot of retail stores, reastaurants and attractions within walking distance of 21 major hotels and the Bartimore Convention Center. Located on the Inner Harbor's western shore, it is the perfect way to start tour.

When you travel to Montreal, there is one place you must go to--- The Observatory of Montreal Tower. It is a panoramic view of Montreal from the observatory at the top of the world's tallest inclined tower. In fact, on a clear day, when you are in there you can see up to 80 kilometres in every direction. As to how to get up there, you can take a cable car with large windows overlooking the stunning view, including the Olympic Park. (ps. like the picture)

1 Comments:

At 3:11 AM , Blogger Yuhsiuwriting said...

Great job! You have an interesting topic!
Some of the ideas are good, just pay attention to word order.


There are some good or special places where I have been to, Baltimore and Montreal.
-->for example, ...


Recently selected as one of the top 10 summer destinations in the world for 2005 is Baltimore by frommer's, the world's leading travel guide publisher.
-->word order
Baltimore was recently selected as one of the top 10 summer destinations ...by ..., the world's...



From the city's continual cultural renewal to the new attractions, restaurants and hotels.

-->Where is the verb of this sentence? This is not a complete sentence!

It is a excellent destination for summer and fall to visit Baltimore.
-->It an excellent ...for summer and fall.

you will find ther is so many things yo explore that you can not do it all in one day
-->there are so many things that you cannot explore them all in one day.

By the way, on the Inner Harbor's western shore, it is the perfect way to start tour.
-->Is this relevant to the topic sentence of this paragraph? Does it support the topic? If yes, keep it. If no, delete it.
-->The Inner Harbor's western shore is the perfect place to start the tour.

tallestinclined-->is this one word or two words?

And get there, a cable car with large windows providing their own view of the city, including the Olympic Park
-->Do you want to say 'As to how to get up there, you can take...overlooking the stunning view...

 

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