My favorite TV program- Project Runway
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My favorite TV program is Project Runway that is a kind of program about clothes and designers. The host is a German model- Heidi Klum, and one of the judges is Micheal Kors, a fashion designer. They chose 15 challengers from thousands of people to enter this competition. Those designers took weekly challenge in New York Parsons School for design. For example, a suit of clothes made by plants, a formal dress made for Miss USA, or clothes made by trash that they find in factory of recycling, and so on.
I remember one scene that designers should discover inspirations in the apartment and they only had fifteen minutes to finish their creation. Judges would score the exam, and that means the worst creation would be out. The relationship between challengers and judges were like friends, partners, students, and teachers. Besides, judges would give suggestions, criticisms, and praises appropriately. After the elimination from the competition weekly, there were only three challengers showing a cycle of their creation in Olympus Fashion Week. Judges would choose one of them to be the winner whose creation would publish in fashion magazine. He would also get 100,000 US dollars and a lot of trophies. It is certainly the best opportunity for new designers to become famous.
On this program, there are many experiences we probably can learn from those designers. For instance, how to make their ideas from abstract to become concrete, how to allot work, compromise, and cooperate with people or a group under pressure and time, and how to face people if they have questions about you. In addition, I also can see different kinds of personality. Some of them always caviled at others' appreciation of the beauty or argued with people. However, some never gave up even though they failed. I think I have learnt more different attitude from it.
I remember one scene that designers should discover inspirations in the apartment and they only had fifteen minutes to finish their creation. Judges would score the exam, and that means the worst creation would be out. The relationship between challengers and judges were like friends, partners, students, and teachers. Besides, judges would give suggestions, criticisms, and praises appropriately. After the elimination from the competition weekly, there were only three challengers showing a cycle of their creation in Olympus Fashion Week. Judges would choose one of them to be the winner whose creation would publish in fashion magazine. He would also get 100,000 US dollars and a lot of trophies. It is certainly the best opportunity for new designers to become famous.
On this program, there are many experiences we probably can learn from those designers. For instance, how to make their ideas from abstract to become concrete, how to allot work, compromise, and cooperate with people or a group under pressure and time, and how to face people if they have questions about you. In addition, I also can see different kinds of personality. Some of them always caviled at others' appreciation of the beauty or argued with people. However, some never gave up even though they failed. I think I have learnt more different attitude from it.
posted by Wanda @ 12:04 PM
3 Comments
3 Comments:
I think your essay is unfocus on the topic; there are also some mistakes in grammar."certainly a best opportunity " You should use "the best", not "a best".
I think your introduction of this TV program is very clearly to audiences. But there are some errors in mechanics. Like "But sime never give up even though they are failure." Is the "sime" should be "time"? Or this is a word that i don't know...It my opinion.
I think this TV program is not completely a comedy, but your writing structure is generally correct.
And I have some recommendations for your sentences.
1. “The host is a Germany model” could be “The host is a German model.”
2.” The relationship between challengers and judges like friends, partners, students, and teachers” should be “The relationship between challengers and judges is like friends, partners, students, and teachers.”
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